∙结合生活中的一个场景,写如何保护我自己
参考下列词汇:calm down ask…for help
prevent…from in danger
作文题解析:
这个题目延续了去年出题的方式,即给题干不给要点,但要点在题干中,并要求学生辨认写作要点。往往有以下几个点容易出错,大家看你有没有?
1. 过多写具体事例,重点应该是保护自己的方式
2. 把myself 写成us,ourselves, 甚至himself, herself
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∙先来第一篇,著名的张杰老师写了一篇关于火灾的:
∙As a student, I think it important for me to protect myself from dangerous situations. I will take fires as an example. First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help. Then, as is known to all, calling 119 immediately is the most effective way to save myself. As well as that, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators. In conclusion, with positive attitude and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires.
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∙初中英语名师"乐乐"-Demon老师贡献了一篇关于地震的:
∙Everyone in my family was awaked by the unusual shaking. The first word that came to my mind was earthquake. When I looked outside of the window, I found everyone running here and there, and I could hear the shouting from the neighbors. Despite the fact that I was in danger, I told myself to calm down and think about the ways to protect myself in an earthquake. I should get outside instead of hiding inside the building. I couldn’t take the lift but walk downstairs. No sooner had I got outside than I asked the police for help. And I should always be aware of the unexpected drop overhead. Following these ways, I managed to prevent myself from being hurt, and survived the earthquake. I believe that these are useful ways to protect myself in an earthquake.
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∙接下来是大米老师的 :
∙A terrible fire in Jilin took many people’s lives recently and brought endless pains to a large number of families. So if I were caught in a fire, I would try my best to protect myself. First, I would stay calm. A cool head can prevent me from taking rash actions and help to pick out a right solution the first time. Then, I would call 119 with my exact location and the situation then. Most importantly, I would cover myself with wet clothes and made my way to the secure channel instead of jumping out of the windows. With above tips, I will surely be able to protect myself from fires.下载本文