句子润色——简单句的高级句式
简单句其实也可以不简单,若将简单句与非谓语动词短语、形容词短语、介词短语、同位语、主格结构等巧妙地合并在一起,不但可以表达更丰富的内容,而且也使句子变得更精彩,充分显示你在英语表达上的实力。以下各句选自近年各省市高考写作范文的高级简单句,请补充完整，欣赏、熟记、模仿：
1. 同位语
I want to have a pen friend, hopefully_______________________________________________. 我想有一个笔友, 希望是一个二十出头且兴趣相投的女孩子。(同位语中又有两个并列的介词短语修饰)
2. 形容词短语
___________________,Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. 出生于美国的托马斯·爱迪生是一个伟大的科学家和发明家。
3. 不定式短语
______________, we need to do sports. 为了学习好, 我们需要做体育运动。
4. 现在分词短语
In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, _____________________
在这幅图中, 一个鸟妈妈呆在一棵大树的鸟巢里, 观看她的鸟仔飞走。
5. 过去分词短语
__________________________________, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient. 与信件和公用电话相比, 手机和网络更快也更方便。
6. 介词短语
______________________________, he encourages us to think by ourselves. 他鼓励我们思考, 而不是马上告诉我们答案。(instead of的使用)
[即时练习] 按括号中的提示翻译下列句子。
1. 我是李华, 四川的一个学生。(同位语)
I’m Li Hua,_______________.
2. 与其他老师相比, 摩尔先生更注意教学方法。(用过去分词短语)
__________________________, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching.
3. 北京动物园, 建于1906年, 有100多年的历史了。(用过去分词短语)
The Beijing Zoo, _____________, has a history of more than 100 years.
4. 李华在公共汽车站等601公车上去学。(现在分词短语)
. Li Hua was at the bus stop, _______________________________.
5. 我们学生应当通过努力学习而不是考试作弊来获得好成绩。(介词短语)
We students should try to get good results by studying hard ____________________________.
6. 合并句子:
⑴ The moon travels round the earth once every month.
⑵ The moon is a natural satellite of the earth.(现在分词短语)
_______________________________________________________________________________
7. 合并句子：
⑴ He was well known for his expert advice.
⑵ He was able to help a great number of people with their personal affairs.(过去分词短语)
______________________________________________________________________________
写作训练二
句子润色---用高级结构让整个句子靓起来
利用以下各招可给句子润色, 让句子靓起来。
1. 使用强调句
用do, does, did强调一般时态的谓语动词; 用it is ...that ...强调谓语之外的各种句子成分。
_________________________that her father recognized her. 直到她摘下眼镜她父亲才认出她。
2. 使用倒装句。
________________________learn English well. 只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。
3. 使用with的复合结构。如：
___________________, I couldn’t go on studying. 由于那噪音的持续, 我无法继续学习。
4. 使用非谓语动词。
_________________at the southwest corner of our school, the botanical garden has an area of 1000 square metres. 校园西南角/面积1000平方米。
5. 恰当使用被动句。
Above all, something ________to stop polluting. 最重要的是, 必须釆取某些措施来阻止污染。
6. 使用各类从句, 如使用“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句。
There’re many kinds of tea in China,_________ _____Longjing Tea is famous all over the world. 中国的茶叶有很多种, 其中龙井茶是世界著名的。
7. “数词+名词”改用“as many as+数词+名词”。
A great number of buildings were destroyed, leaving ___________10, 000, 000 people homeless. 请多房屋被摧毁, 使多达千万的人失去家园。
介词短语与with结构强化训练
根据汉语提示完成英文句子, 或用所给词的适合形式填空。
1. We are sure that everything will be better _______________________(随着时间的推移).
2. _________________________ (一到达), we began to work immediately.
3. ___________________(做完那些工作之后), we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees, and _______________(在离开之前), we took some photos to record our green action.
4. ___________________________(在比赛的过程中), you should finish your speech in five minutes and try your best to express yourself in English fluently.
5. ___________________(一听到铃声), students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could.
6.____________________________(随着科学和技术的发展), the world is changing every day.
7. ______________________________(所有的事都做完之后), they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. [用主格结构]
8.__________________ _________________ (由于那噪音的持续), I couldn’t go on studying. [with的复合结构]
9.____________________________ (随着社会的快速发展), it’s quite necessary that we (should) have a good knowledge of English and computer.
写作训练三
句子润色——非谓语动词短语和强调结构专练
根据汉语提示完成英文句子, 或用所给词的适合形式填空。
用非谓语动词短语
1. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,___________________________ (一路上有说有笑).
2. At about 1 o-clock this afternoon， Tracy called, ___________________________________[说他明天上午不能在咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)同你见面] as she has something important to attend to.
3. _________________________________(参加英语演讲比赛)is a helpful way to learn English.
4. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries ______________________________________(是为了确定我们没有卷入任何麻烦事).
5. ____________________(被他的话所感动), I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing __________________________(名叫“母亲”的一首歌) for the students.
用强调结构或倒装句式
6. ____________________________(直到19世纪末……才) shooting earned its status as a sport.
7. We should be thankful to our parents _____________________________________(因为是他们把我们带到这个世界).
8. Everyone knows that we are busy all day. Seldom __________________________________(我们知道国内外正在发生什么).
9.__________________________(只有用这种方法我才能)gain more confidence. [用倒装句式]
10._________________________ (只因为他有病了)did he not come to school.
11.________________________ (只有那时, 我才认识到)that I had been wrong.
it句型
根据中文提示完成下列句子。
12. For the two reasons mentioned above, ___________________(……就不足为奇了)I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.
13. As I am away from my parents, __________________(对我来说有必学会)to live on my own.
14. _________________________(众所周知) some students cheat in examinations at school.
15. As we haven’ t mastered enough English words, sometimes we may _________________ (觉得困难) to follow the teacher.
16. I think ________________________________________ (在考试中作弊是错误的)because it breaks the rules of school.
写作训练四
句子润色——简单句合并成复合句
有时为了使句子的连贯性更强, 表达也更为贴切、自然, 我们在两个或者多个简单句之间加上and, but, or(或者, 否则), for (因为), while(而, 却), when(就在这个时候), not only ...but also等并列连词, 使其成为并列复合句。如：
⑴ Our outdoor activity will last three hours. We’ll be back at about 11 o’clock
→Our outdoor activity will last three hours and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.
⑵ You must hurry. You’ll miss the plane. →You must hurry or you’ll miss the plane.
⑶ Honey is sweet. The bee stings. →Honey is sweet but the bee stings.
在两个或者多个简单句之间加上when, after, as, because, where, which, who等从属连词, 可以使简单句变成复合句。如：
⑴ We will organize all kinds of activities in our English club. We can not only practise but also learn more English in the activities.(改为含定语从句的复合句)
→
⑵ He missed the first bus. He came to school late.(改为含状语从句的复合句)
→
即时练习
将下列各组句子合并成并列复合句或主从复合句。
1. He was tired. He went to bed.
______________________________________________________________________________
2. Our teacher must be at home. The door is open.
______________________________________________________________________________
3. ⑴ A satellite is an object.
⑵ A satellite travels in an orbit round another object in space.
⑶ A satellite is either natural or man-made.
_______________________________________________________________________________
4. ⑴ We high school students do have some growing pains.
⑵ We can get rid of them correctly and wisely.
_______________________________________________________________________________
5. ⑴ There was once a famous detective. ⑵ He was named Sherlock Holmes.
⑶ He lived in London. ⑷ The time was at the end of the nineteenth century.
_______________________________________________________________________________
6. ⑴ The other day we had an English speech contest.
⑵ I won the first prize in the contest.
_______________________________________________________________________________
7. ⑴ 79.3％ of the surveyed citizens say that their main motivation is to help their parents to live a better life.
⑵ 67.7％ claim that they work hard in order to change their own fate.
_______________________________________________________________________________
8. We must study hard. Knowledge is power.
_______________________________________________________________________________
9. ⑴ Students can improve their writing ability in this way.
⑵ They can strengthen their self-confidence.
_____________________________________________________________________
写作训练五
强化训练：并列复合句和主从复合句专练
并列复合句 用适当的并列连词填空。
1. Work hard , _________you will fail.
2. Work hard, ____ you will get good grades.
3. I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practicing English， _____I failed to pass the mid-term examination.
4. About 9: 00 last night, I was busy preparing for my tomorrow’s test _____ suddenly loud noises came into my room.
5. Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, __________ 48% of the boys favor sports stars.
6. However sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others ________ when you fail in doing something, you may have a bad mood.
7. Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, _____all are welcome.
主从复合句 根据汉语提示完成英语句子。
8.I have taken with me ______________ ___________________________________________(你叫我帮你还给市图书馆的那两本书).
9. We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, ________________________________(一辆蓝色的公共汽车将在那里等候).
10. __________________ (如果你有兴趣), please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday _____________________________________ (以便我们作必要的安排).
11. It is said that slightly more than 50% students, _________________________ (这在世界排名第一), are short-sighted.
12. ________________________ (在他进来后不久), he cried on his desk.
13. The causes for short-sightedness are so complicated ______________________ ______________(没有一种药可以治愈近视).
14.________________________________ (如果我是野生动物园的动物), I would feel annoyed___________________________________(当人们不断地同我拍照时).
If I were an animal in the wildlife park when people keep photographing with me
15. He suggested that__________________________________________________(中小学生不要过分使用眼睛, 且要多做户外活动).
16. ______________________(使我印象最深的)is his famous saying. “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration”.
17. ______________________(我要强调的是)that each of us should listen more to others.
写作常见句型综合训练
第一部分：
句型1： The reason are chiefly as follows. Firstly, …Secondly, …
理由主要如下：首先……其次……
The reasons are chiefly as follows. Firstly trees can take in a lot of dioxide which is harmful to our health. Secondly, trees can make our city more beautiful.
句型2： Actions should be taken to …必须采取措施去……
Actions should be taken to get rid of all kinds of pollution.
句型3 ：There are good reasons to … 完全有理由去 ……
There are good reasons to cancel this impractical plan.
句型4： Therefore I strongly recommend that … 因此，我强烈建议……
Therefore I strongly recommend that we should write more interesting books for children in case they should indulge in obscene readings.
句型5： A hot topic discussed today is … 现在，人们讨论的一个热点问题是......
A hot topic discussed today is whether we should clone human beings.
句型6： There is no evidence to suggest that … 认为……是毫无根据的
There is no evidence to suggest that we must depend on western countries to develop our economy.
句型7： When it comes to…many people believe that … 当说到……时，许多人认为……
When it comes to global warming, many people think it is dangerous for human beings.
句型8： Now it is time something was done to … 现在是采取措施做……的时候了
Now it is time something was done to get rid of pollution.
句型9： From what has been discussed above, we may …根据以上讨论我们可以……
From what has been discussed above, we may conclude that it is necessary to collect money to build a bridge.
句型10： It goes without saying that … ……是不言而喻的。
It goes without saying that doing well in your lessons will make your parents happy.
用上述句型翻译下列句子：
1.理由主要如下:首先,吸烟有害健康,其次，吸烟可能引起火灾.
2.必须采取措施解决这个问题。
3.完全有理由实施鼓励储蓄的计划。
4.因此我强烈建议学校采取措施保证每个学生的安全. ensure the safety of sb
5.现在人们讨论的热点话题是房假是否会持续上涨.(go up)
6.认为学习好的学生就一定事业成功是毫无根据的.(succeed in one’s career)
7.当说到网络对青少年的影响时,许多人认为不应该让孩子远离电脑.(keep sb away from)
8.现在是采取措施保护这个古庙的时候了.
9.根据以上的讨论，我们可以推断张华就是凶手.(infer, murderer)
10.真正的朋友应该互相帮助是不言而喻的.
第二部分
句型1： It must be pointed out that …必须指出的是……
例：It must be pointed out that it is one of our basic State policies to control population growth.
句型2 ：It must be kept in mind that … 必须记住的是……
例：It must be kept in mind that there is no other secret of success but hard work.
句型3： As is known to all …大家都知道……
As is known to all, knowledge is power.
句型4 ：It is hard to say …很难说……
It is hard to say whether the plan is practical.
句型5 ：There is no doubt that … 毫无疑问……
There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have any difficulties.
句型6 ：To tell the truth… 说实话……
To tell the truth, many mistakes we made could have been avoided.
句型7： As we know… 我们知道……
As we know, it was not until recently that the problem was solved.
句型8： As far as we know… 就我们所知……
As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book.
句型9 ：It has been proved that … 已经证实……
It has been proved that his theory is right.
句型10：Have you considered doing …? 你有没有考虑过做……？
Have you considered going abroad to study?
仿照上面例句翻译：
1.必须指出的是，英语是我们所学学科中的一门重要学科。
2.必须记住:失败乃成功之母.
3.大家都知道，有志者事竟成.
4.很难说这个理论是否正确.
5.毫无疑问,只有通过这个方法,我们才能按时完成任务。
6.说实话，我本来是可以早一点的。
7.我们知道,新中国是1949年成立的.
8.就我们所知道,他为人民的,耗费了他一生精力.(liberation)
9.已经证实这个计划是可行的。
10.你没有考虑过就如何学英语给我一些建议吗?
第三部分
句型1： It is / was obvious / clear that …很明显……
It is obvious / clear that she is terribly nervous on stage.
句型2： It’s a great pleasure to …(感到)非常愉快
It’s a great pleasure to work with you.
句型3 ：It’s my great honor to …是我莫大的荣幸
It’s my great honor to introduce the governor.
句型4 ：In order to … you should … 为了……你应该……
In order to understand this essay fully, you should read more about its author.
句型5： I think it (is) of great importance / value … 我认为……很重要。
If you want to succeed in life, I think it is of great importance to set a goal for yourself.
句型6 ：Is it convenient for you to …? 你是否方便……？
Is it convenient for you to have a word with me?
句型7 ：If it is possible ……可能的话……
If it is possible, lend me your car tonight.
句型8 ：I’m curious about sth. / to do sth. 我对（做）……很好奇。
I’m curious to know what was happening outside.
句型9： Generally speaking …总的来说 ……
Generally speaking, people like to hear praises from others.
句型10 ：How long will it take you to …? ……要用多少时间？
How long will it take you to recite such a passage?
仿照上面例句翻译
1.很明显这种特殊的稻种使得同样的田地多收获三分之一的产量.(strain of rice稻种,produce, one-third more of )
2.跟你相处我感到非常愉快.
3.能有机会想你学习是我莫大的荣幸.
4.为了考大学，你应该学好英语。
5.我认为你制定这个计划很有价值.
6.你是否方便带我参观以下你们的新学校?
7.若可能,我想明天见你。
8.我很好奇，想知道你在做的一切。
9.一般来讲,学好英语不是很难。
10.联合国使世界摆脱贫困要花多长时间？（get rid of）
第四部分：
句型1：我认为这是...的一个好机会.：I think this is a good chance for you to..
句型2：看起来好象 ：There seems to be...
句型3：我认为……是不……：I don’t think it is adj. to …
句型4：我们应该努力地做某事：We should make an effort to do …
句型5：问题是 ……：The problem / question is that / whether …
句型6： 一方面……另一方面……：On (the) one hand … on the other (hand) …
仿照上面例句翻译
1.我想找一找汉语中玩文字游戏的笑话,这是一个好机会.
2.看起来这两个词之间好象有点区别.
3.我认为我们应该携手保护环境。
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5.问题是你能否劝说他放弃他的计划。
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