假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。内容提示：
1. 一定要做好课前预习 2. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记
3. 课后认真完成作业 4. 每天进行英语听说练习
5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
首段：
1.写作背景
※ After I read your letter, I learn that you......
※ After reading your letter, I learn that you are having trouble in doing .....
2. 写作目的
※ I am writing to give you some suggestions ,which I think may be helpful to you.
※ I am writing to share my views upon this problem ,which I think may be helpful to you.
中间段：
1.主旨句
※ Here are my suggestions/tips on learning English.
※ Here are several useful and practical suggestions for you.
※ Some suggestions can be listed as follows.
2. 建议内容
课前: 做好预习 prepare/ make preparations for
课堂: 上认真听讲,记好笔记 pay attention to what the teacher says carefully
课后: 认真完成作业 finish your homework by yourself/on your own
每天: 进行英语听说练习 practise listening and speaking every day
加强课外阅读扩大词汇量 enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.
结尾段：
Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you can master this beautiful language before long. Looking forward to your good news.
【高级建议句型】
1. be supposed to do
※ You are supposed to get rid of the feelings of being frustrated in order to keep a positive attitude towards life.
2. If I were you, I would do sth.
※ If I were you, I would turn to your teachers or even specialists,aiming to obtain some beneficial suggestions.
3. You may consider doing sth.
※ You may consider doing playing less game.
4. It is beneficial for you to do sth.
※ It is beneficial for you to take part in after-class activities actively,to take part in after-class activities actively,building a relationship with your classmates.
5. I think it would be more beneficial if you could do sth.
※ I think it would be more beneficial if you could eat less snacks and sleep more.
6. Only when you……can you…..
※ Only when you experience the pain of pain, can you enjoy the happiness of the happiness.
※ Only when you have acquired a good knowledge of grammar,can you write correctly.
you need to do first is to do sth.
※ What you need to do first is to talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of releasing your anger.
【高考英语写作常见“利处”】
1.挣钱 ?
※ We can make some pocket money to buy some meaningful and educational books.?
2.培养兴趣、开阔视野 ?
※ Only by doing so can we cultivate our interests and broaden our horizons.?
3.提高能力（交际、交流） ?
※ Not only our communication ability but also our interpersonal skills can be polished and improved.?
4.交朋友 ?
※ We can make some close friends to share with each other our own life experience.?
5.利用时间 ?
※ We will be able to make the most of our everyday time to do some valuable things.?
6.享受生活
※ It gives you an opportunity to enjoy your life from a different point of view.?
7.有意义、有趣 ?
※ It is not only meaningful but also entertaining. ?
8.面对挑战、克服困难、达成目标、实现梦想 ?
※ It can teach us how to face challenges, overcome difficulties, achieve our goals and realize(achieve) our dreams in the future.?
9.口号句型
※ Only in this way can we.....
1) enjoy a happier and healthier life.
2) enjoy a harmonious relationship with others.
3) enjoy a more balanced way of life.
4) survive the future competition
5) enjoy a much brighter future.
【真题演练1】
【2008年山东卷】假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：
1、帮他分析原因； 2、给他提出建议； 3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。
注意：词数120 ~150
【范文1】
Dear Liming,
How are you doing Our teacher told me that you had some trouble in getting along well with our new classmates. So, I am writing this letter to give you a hand.
From my perspective, there are two main reasons accounting for your problem. For one thing, so shy are you that you don't often communicate with other students. For another, seldom do you take part in afterschool activities; consequently, you have few friends here.
Here are several useful and practical suggestions for you. First and foremost, chatting more with our classmates will make others know more about you. Besides, only when you be braver can you become more outgoing and make more close friends. Last but not least, if I were you, I would join some clubs, where we can find more common interests. Hopefully, these suggestions will be helpful for you.
As the vice monitor, I will spare no effort to help you. For example, I will introduce my own friends to you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know. I have the confidence that you will adapt to the new environment before long. Sincerely looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Zhanghua
【范文2】
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to know that you are having trouble in communicating with others. The truth is that what puzzles you is undoubtedly a puzzle for many newcomers, so you don’t have to worry so much. I suppose that you just haven’t found your feet in your class yet. Here are some useful tips.
To start with, what you need to do is to take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, which is a good way of learning about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Moreover, I highly recommend that you should get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. At last, we can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.
I sincerely hope you will find my suggestions useful. Let’s stay in touch. I do hope to hear good news from you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【真题演练2】
【2008全国II】假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点:
1. 参加中文; 2. 看中文书刊、电视； 3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。
注意：
1.词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Now, I am writing to give you a hand.
Here are several useful and practical suggestions for you. To begin with, attending a Chinese course will provide you with the most widely used words and expressions. Moreover, some Chinese books and magazines as well as TV programs may help you know more about Chinese culture. What’s more, it is also beneficial for you to learn some Chinese songs, so that your pronunciation and your listening skills can be naturally improved. Finally, only when you make some Chinese friends and often chat with them can you have enough chance to practice you Chinese.
Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please drop me a line to let me know. I have the confidence that you can master this beautiful language before long. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
Li Hua
假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。内容提示：
1. 一定要做好课前预习 2. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记
3. 课后认真完成作业 4. 每天进行英语听说练习
5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
