假如你是李华,想参加China Daily 举办的以"梦想职业体验"为主题的2019年夏令营活动.请给主办人Mr.Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件.
内容包括:
1.个人信息与兴趣爱好
2.梦想职业与个人计划.
写作要求;
1.词数90词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
2.文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名.
Dear Mr.Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.__________
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
满分作文
【分析】高分句型一:I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school. Spend time doing sth…花时间做某事.
这句话意为:我课后花很多时间和我同学在图书馆看书.
高分句型二:If I have this kind of oppotunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance. If 引导的条件状语从句,遵循"主将从现"原则,即主句用一般将来时,从句用一般现在时.
这句话意为:如果我有这样的机会去体验我的梦想职业,我将会珍惜这样的机会.
【解答】Dear Mr.Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.(开篇点明题意)
My name is Li Hua.I like reading and writing.I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school (高分句型一).And I have a habit of keeping a dairy.I want to be a writer when I grow up.So After knowing your summer camp ,I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience.If I have this kind of oppotunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance(高分句型二).After work,I will spend more time making a summary.(从自己的个人信息和兴趣爱好出发进行介绍自己)
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.(结尾给出期望)
Best wishes!
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