专题1
一、专题知识梳理
“主题阐述型”作文是未来中考的趋势
纵观最近两年的中考和一模二模等大考中的作文题目,不难发现“主题阐述型作文”正无越来越受到出题人的青睐。无论对于复习临考的初三生还是其他年级的同学,了解趋势,未雨绸缪,早作准备,有的放矢,才是征服“作文”这一最中考英语考试最高峰的王道吧。
所谓“主题阐述型”作文,学生需要结合题目中给出的具体情景或数据来展开写作。学生在写作时既不能泛泛而谈,也不能举出不相干的事例。这样的作文一般写作思路是:
1首段先将题目中的情景简要总结并引出自己的观点;
2中间段要给出详细展开自己观点,同时要辅以契合的数据,事实等作为论据;
3尾段呼应开头点题。
因此这样的作文都是夹叙夹议类的文章,可以一箭双雕考察学生两种体裁写作能力。更重要的是和具体情景的结合,也需要现场功力,绝非靠机械式地套用模板可行,这样也更好地考察学生真实的写作功底。
所以平时我们应该如何准备呢?
1 建立自己的素材库。平时各种话题写过的作文(作文话题分类另见博文),牛人的范文,参考书上经典,其
中的优美词句,典型事例等等用心记下来,且一定要用笔记录。自己动手写才能走心,才能内化成自己的东西。
2 关注周围的世界。很多主题阐释性的作文都是和实事挂钩的,如果你平时就做个有心人,关注周遭的世
界,了解一些基本概念的英文,如雾霾(haze/ smog),智能手机(smartphone),失联客机(disappeared airliner)… 在考场上就能更从容,不至于现场词穷,甚至看不懂题目。
3 养成在头脑中构建语段的习惯。看到一个新闻或现象,不要当成事不关己的窗外事,试着去评论或思考一
下,哪怕听听智者的言论,也能受到启发。很多时候,大家写文章,徒有文字的堆砌,也用了很多从句,但绕来绕去就是一个肤浅的意思,归根还是没有更深的思考和总结。当然中考的作文话题不会太大,不指望一个十几岁少年去针砭时事,激扬文字,基本都是和少年学习生活相关的话题,一花一世界,一树一菩提,不要小看简单的事情。
二、专题精讲
1.
Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to Protect Myself”(以“如何保护自己”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
提示:自我保护是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。请谈谈你再生活中怎样进行自我保护。(课结合生活中的某一个情景或具体事例,如:面对灾难如何自救,如何预防受骗或侵害,如何避免生活中的意外等等。)
这个题目给出了种种具体情境的假设,但不限定,挑你擅长的,还算好写。
需要现场发挥的:一个具体情境的描述,如火灾,地震,抢劫,网络诈骗等等。涉及到记叙,对动词,形容词等细节描写要求高。
可以套用的句型:
开头:…warns us the importance of awareness of self-protection facing unexpected disasters.
结尾:All in all, we should equip ourselves with self-protection skills and knowledge.
这两个不错的句子几乎可以安插到任何一个危险情景。有心的你应该记下来吧。
中考英语作文范文:
题目要求:
How to protect myself 怎样保护自己。可以通过实例如怎样在灾难中自救;怎样防火、防盗等。
可参考关键词:in danger, calm down, prevent ...... from, ask ...... for help
Recently, ①there struck another terrible earthquake in Sichuan province causing serious injuries and death.
It warns us the importance of ②awareness of self-protection facing unexpected disasters.First, I shall never be lost in panic for ③only with calmness can I find out the best way to escape in time. Besides, ④rush to the open air if possible or just hide around something solid, like the corner or the pipe. Last but not least, after I make it, I’ll call for rescue for the people still in danger.In all, ⑤we can’t stress more the importance of proper self-protection, for it can really save our life ⑥at critical moments!
精彩亮点分析:①地震发生,用struck表突如其来,且用倒装句引出,强调突然性。
②知道自我保护的重要性,awareness动词名词化,表达更丰富。
③Only… can I…倒装句强调出地震中的calmness的重要性。
④具体保护措施有很多,捡两个典型的表述,言简意赅。
⑤Can’t stress…more 否定词+比较级句型,“再怎么强调也不为过”结尾增强语势。
⑥At critical moments危难时刻,和开头unexpected disaster相应和。
写作小tips:
今年以来面对各地频发的灾难,自我保护已成为热门话题。大家都应该有话可说。面对解决问题型的作文,下笔前要有取舍,先想好三个最典型的措施,按递进的思路排列;语言宜精炼,多用固定搭配和从句;中间用逻辑词连接,即可顺利成文。
又如:
去年12月上旬,申城笼罩在茫茫的雾霾(was shrouded in heavy smog)中,陷于重度污染(severe pollution)。人们戴口罩(wear masks)出行,雾霾天给人们的健康带来危害,给生活和工作带来不便(inconvenience). 请你就其中某一天,描述你的经历和感受。
需要现场发挥的:具体某一天的经历,如早上车辆缓行,体育课暂停,咳嗽。。同样涉及到记叙,对动词,形容词等细节描写要求高。
可以套用模板的:
如尾句:Let’s take actions at once and I sincerely hope fresh air (clear water/ flourishing woods/ a blue earth/ an eco-friendly environment… ) will come back soon.
行文中间的take actions, improve people’s sense of protection, be fully aware the result of…词组都可以套用。
范文:
Since last December, Shanghai has been in severe pollution with heavy smog, ①which has caused a series of inconveniences and health threat to people’s life.
I still remember one ②dim morning I was greeted by the heavy haze instead of birds’ singing and the fresh
morning air as before. Then on the way to school, my father’s car ③moved like a snail ④with the visibility less than 500 meters. What‘s worse, our PE lesson was canceled that day because of the poor weather. So we ⑤had no choice but to stay in the classroom, ⑥looking outside at the quiet playground, missing the laughter and joy once there.How I wish there will be some relief tomorrow and that fresh air will come back soon.
内容分析:
精彩亮点分析:
亮点一:第一段用非限定性定从,一句话雾霾天气带来的危害,言简意赅,且用完成时时态可以更好强调对现在依然有影响。
亮点二:dim(昏暗的) ,greet (迎接)等小词的妙用,让人想到一早出门灰蒙蒙的天气,雾霾扑面而来的画面,形象。联想新三L11里那个officious customs officer,原文He was greeted by an unpleasant
smell which convinced him that I was telling the truth.
亮点三:车开得象蜗牛一样慢,形象的比喻。
亮点四:with介词短语做伴随状语,简明道出车开得慢的原因。Visibility能见度。
亮点五:have no choice but to do sth. 别无选择,语法课学过,作文里善用。
亮点六:looking, missing两个分词短语做伴随状语,形象写出体育课被取消,我坐在教室里沮丧的心情。
写作小Tip:
记叙文写作,注意时间场景切换的逻辑词要明确,同时一不小心就会写成长篇累牍,有效信息也会稀释,所以要注意语言的精练,这对语法和用词的要求都比议论文高一些。平时,需要大家多关注时政同时勤加练习。
三、专题过关
作文题目:
一个关于初三学生睡眠时间调查结果的数据图表,要求学生以图表为依据简单分析初三学生的日常作息情况,谈谈感想,并就如何安排好复习迎考提些建议。
这是多年不考的图表作文,很多同学感到无从下笔,普遍得分率很低。其实仔细分析,无论是图标,图片,新闻背景。。剥去他的包装,就是让你写一篇给出复习临考建议的文章,这样的题目大家平时一定练过,还记得前年的中考题目吗:给正在为某考试结果焦虑的好朋友Betty写一封信,安慰并鼓励她。。这两个题目有很多可以相互嵌套的地方呢,这样想就不会慌了吧。
需要现场发挥的:对表格中数据的提炼总结。注意:表格中信息庞杂,只挑重要的数据详说,其他的一笔带过甚至可以忽略。如果试图把表格中每个信息描述一遍,估计60个词都不够用。所以去粗取精的能力很重要。
可以套用模板的:
真题范文里一句话:In order to get rid of the nervousness, you’d better talk to friends about your feelings. Besides, you should take part in some outdoor activities such as playing badminton. It can help release your stress, strengthen your body and even improve your memory.
在这篇文章中就可以改成:We need time to have enough rest and some outdoor activities so as to release our stress, strengthen our body and finally improve our efficiency.范文:
According to a recent survey on daily sleeping hours of Junior 3 students, only 13% claim to have 8 hours sleeping, which is an internationally recognized healthful sleeping period for teenagers. ①In fact, over 80% of them lack enough sleeping. ②
I think it’s convincible, for many students around me are suffering from tiredness and studying burdens.③
They don’t want to waste one minute to prepare for the coming senior high school entrance examination. To me, it’s not a wise choice, for we should have enough rest to refresh before we can efficiently devote ourselves to reviewing again. ④
In all, make a reasonable schedule and hope we will achieve our dream with physical and mind health.⑤(114)
内容分析:
图表类作文属于“主题阐述类”作文一种,需要结合具体情境来写,不能一上来就开始分析。所以文章行文思路是:1 描述数据(典型的为下文论点服务的数据,而非所有!)2 分析学生日常作息情况(就是睡眠不足的原因,和开头相关。), 3 给出自己的建议。
精彩亮点分析:
亮点一:用一个定从引出8小时睡眠的意义,且internationally recognized 这样的短语可以代替一个长定从(which is internationally recognized…), 使表达更浓缩精炼。
亮点二:从表格中纷繁的信息中摘出8小时这个点着重写,其他可以一笔带过,详略得当。
亮点三:convincible 可信的,学过新三第一课就知道吧。第二段首句表达自己观点,用for 原因状从引出论据。
亮点四:一句话的建议,信息含量却很大,因有for, before引导的状从,refresh(vi)恢复精神,devote ourselves to 致力于。。
亮点五:尾端给出精简建议,make a reasonable schedule 指定合理时间安排;并提出畅想achieve our dream with physical and mind health. 正能量点题。
四、学法提炼
总之,“主题阐述型”的作文即考察大家平时的积累,又考察大家临场的应变和发挥,一箭双雕,会成为未来中考作文命题的趋势。还是那句话,笔耕不辍,体悟常新!收起心,拿起笔来,常练习,勤总结,无论题目千变万化,对于拥有硬本领的你,又有何妨呢?
专题2
一、专题知识梳理
英语写作是一个非常复杂的操作过程。就中学生的英语写作发展而言,学生需要有字母、单词和句子这些素材的书写能力、构思能力、写作能力和修改能力,这些素材的缺少或运用不当都将直接影响到文章主旨意思的准确表达。因而,在培养学生写作能力的过程中要帮助学生素材的积累和运用二、专题精讲
写作-挫折类
Beginning:
★sayings or positive sentences about life and failure :
1. 有志者事竟成。
Where there is a will, there is a way.
2. 生活并不是怎样在暴风雨中幸存,而是怎样在雨中飞舞。
Life isn't about how to survive in the storm, but how to dance in the rain.
3. 态度决定一切。
Attitude decides everything.
4. 挫折是我们生活的一部分,换句话说,失败可能是通向成功的一条路。
In one way of thinking, failure is a part of life. In another way, failure may be a way towards success.
5. 正如一句名言:失败是成功之母。
As a famous saying goes, "Failure is the mother of success."
6. 挫折并可怕,可怕的是我们害怕挫折并失去了希望。
Failure is not terrible, and the terrible thing is that we are afraid of it and lose hope.
7. 人生不总是坦途。尽管人人都想成功,但有时失败是不可避免的。
Life is not all rose. Although everyone wants to reach the top of success, sometimes failure can’t be avoided.
8. 无论事情看起来多么糟糕,它们最终将被解决。
No matter how bad things seem, they can be solved in the end.
Body:
★how to face failure:
1. 生活就像一面镜子,如果你可以笑对它,它也会笑对你;但如果你对它皱眉或是怀疑它,它也会一样对待你。Life is very much like a mirror: if you smile upon it, I smiles back upon you; but if you frown (皱眉) and look doubtful(怀疑) on it, you will get a similar look in return.
2. 当我们面对挫折时,我们必须要自信,要从失败中汲取教训,尽我们所能去完成自己想要的。
When we face failure, we must be confident in ourselves, draw a useful lesson from it and try our best to finish what we have decided to do.
3. 你不能改变失败,但你可以改变自己面对挫折的方法。
You can’t change that, but you can change your way to face the events that affect you.
4. 当我们面对挫折时,我们应该坚强面对,而不是放弃。
When we meet difficulties, we should stick to what we are doing instead of giving up.
5. 一、思考失败的原因。二、想清楚你的目标是什么。三、谨记失败的教训。
First, always think about your failure.Second,Try to do some thinking about what your real goals may be. The third thing to keep in ears about failure is that it’s a part of life
★examples
刘伟Liu Wei:
Although he lost both arms at an early age, he takes an active attitude towards life and sticks to his music dream. Finally, he became the winner of 2010 China’s Got Talent.
爱迪生Edison:
Although he failed thousands of times before he found the correct way to make a light bulb, he never gave up. But for him, light bulbs would never be invented.
毛:(Chairman Mao)
During his long period of hard struggle, he always had a firm resolution and stuck to his goal. Finally, he set the Chinese people free and founded the PRC.
海伦凯勒Helen·Keller:
Although a terrible disease made her deaf and dumb, she still had passion(激情) for life and made up her mind to be one of the greatest writer. On her way to success, a strong will always supported her.罗伯特布鲁斯Robert Bruce:(蜘蛛结网的故事)
The “Spider-story” is often told. Robert Bruce, leader of the Scots in the 13th century, was hiding in a cave from the English. He watched a spider making a web. The spider tried to reach across a rough place in the rock. He tried six times. On the seventh time he made it and went on to make his web. Bruce is said to have been encouraged by this and to have gone on to defeat the English.
Ending:
1.尽管我的翅膀断了,但我的心还可以飞。
Though my wings are broken, my heart can still fly.
2.如果你选择抱怨或者逃离失败,它可能会永远会跟着你。但是如果你决定变得强壮,那么这些苦难会变成你的财富,给你带来新的希望。
If you choose only to complain and escape from the misfortune, it will always follow you wherever you go. But if you decide to be strong, the hardship will turn out to be fortune on which new hopes will arise.
3.有了积极的态度,生活便会变得简单快乐。无论碰到什么我们都笑着应对,那么整个世界也会对我们微笑。With an active attitude, life is easy and pleasant. Let's smile to whatever we meet and the whole world will smile to us.
4.如果笑对失败,失败会带领我们走向成功。
If we smile to failure, failure will lead us to success.
5.无论事情看起来多么糟糕,它们最终将被解决。
No matter how bad things seem, they can be solved in the end.
环保类
环保类之water: 污染和浪费
开头
通用:
It is widely accepted that the planet we live on is in great danger.
众所周知,我们所居住的星球正面临着巨大的威胁。
Water pollution:
Pollution has become a great threat to our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
The water we drink contains harmful chemicals.
我们喝的水充满了有害的化学物质。
Although it’s accepted that water polution is one of the most serious problems in this area, the action (that) the local government is taking is far from (being) satisfactory.
虽然水污染被认为是这个地区最严重的问题之一,但是当地所采取的行动还远不尽如人意。( it) Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.
环境学家指出:持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题,而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。
Water waste:
Water is the blood of the earth.
水是地球赖以生存的血液。
However, we are facing serious water shortage nowadays.
然而当今我们面临着严重的缺水问题。
Some people have no water to drink, while others waste too much water.
一些人没有水喝,而一些人浪费了太多的水。
Unfortunately, nowadays most people fail to realize the importance of water.
不幸的是,当今很多人都没能意识到XXX的重要性。
原因
Water pollution:
Many reasons caused this problem.
很多原因导致这个问题。
Many factories produce many harmful chemicals and wasted water which run into river.许多工厂产生了大量的有害物质以及废水流入河中。
The use of drugs also pollutes the water.
农药的使用也污染水。
We human pour much dirty water or rubbish into the river.
我们人类向河流倒入了很多脏水和垃圾。
Water waste:
Some people are unaware of the importance of water.
一些人没有意识到水的重要性。
People haven’t made full use of water.
人们没有充分利用水资源。
Serious water pollution makes much water useless.
严重的水污染导致大量的水不能喝。
过度
It’s high time for us to take measures to stop polluting water/save water/ protect the environment.
是时候采取措施停止浪费水/节约用水/保护环境了。
In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.
考虑到问题的严重性,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施。
措施
Water pollution:
The experts suggested that polluted water (should) be made clean before it was poured into the rivers and lakes.专家们建议污水净化以后才能排入河流,湖泊。
The government should make laws to punish those factories that pollute water.
应该制定相关法律,惩罚那些污染水的工厂。
People should obey the rules and leave the rubbish into the rubbish bin instead of the river or lake.
人们应该遵守规则,把垃圾扔到垃圾箱里而不是河或湖里。
Water waste: ——save water
We can take a short shower instead of having a long bath.
我们可以淋浴代替长时间的盆浴。
Turn off the running tap if nobody is using.
没人用的时候关掉水龙头。
When we brush our teeth,we shouldn’t leave the tap running.
当刷牙的时候,我们不应该让水龙头一直流着。
We can flush the toilet/ water flowers or vegetables with used water.
我们可以用用过的水冲马桶/浇花或蔬菜。
结尾
If each of us tries our best to save water/ stop pollution, our Earth will be more and more beautiful.
如果我们每个人都尽自己最大的努力来节约用水/阻止浪费,那么我们的地球将会变得越来越美丽。
环保类之air: 污染
开头
There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem。
无可否认,空气污染是一个极其严重的问题。
Air pollution is one of the major problems of the modern world.
空气污染是现代社会主要问题之一。
The air we breathe is filled with dirty gases.
我们呼吸的空气充满了不干净的气体。
Unusual weather indicates that our living environment is getting worse, which is the warning to us from nature.异常的天气表明我们的生存环境正日益恶化,而这正是大自然给予我们的警告。
原因
With the development of economy, more and more cars are used.
随着经济的发展,越来越多的车被使用。
Many factories produce a lot of dirty gases into the air.
许多工厂产生大量有害气体。
措施
Students should ride to school instead of taking a car. It’s hard work but great exercise.
学生们应该骑自行车去上学而不是坐车。这虽然艰难,但可以锻炼身体。
Adults can go to work together in one car and share the cost
成年人可以拼车去上班,平摊路费。
More trees should be planted instead of being cut down
需要种植更对的树而不是砍伐他们。
结尾
If each of us tries our best to protect the environment, our Earth will be more and more beautiful. 如果我们每个人都尽自己最大的努力来保护环境,那么我们的地球将会变得越来越美丽。
环保类之tree: 砍伐
开头
People are cutting down trees to make quick easy money.
人们为了眼前之利而大肆砍树。
The air is becoming worse and worse.
空气变得越来越差。
More and more trees being cut down is one of the rasons.
就如我所说的,我赞成这个的原因如下:
As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of it because of the following reasons.
学生们对在我们学校举行的英语节有着不同的看法:
Students’ views on the English Festival held in our school vary from person to person.
毫无疑问英语作为一种世界语言,在中国起着日益重要的作用,尤其是在上海这样的国际型大都市。
There is no denying that English, as a world language, is playing an increasingly important role in China, especially in such an international city as Shanghai.
作为学生,最让我们担心的是大量的家庭作业,事实上,我们的老师给了我们太多的家庭作业。
As students, what concerns us a lot is homework. As a matter of fact, our teachers do give us too much homework every day.
二、Opinions
在我看来,要想成为一个好的班干部,要做到以下几点。
As far as I am concerned, to be a good class leader, we should do as following tips.
首先,一个好的班干部应该有着强烈的责任感,应该为全班同学负责任
At first, a wonderful leader is supposed to have a strong sense of responsibility ,so we should be responsible for the whole class.
其次,作为一个好的领导,要愿意听取不同的意见和声音,俗话说;“三个臭皮匠,顶个诸葛亮”,并且,这也是避免犯错的一个有效的方式。
In addition, to be a nice teacher, we must be willing to listen to different voices and accept various advice. As an old saying goes”Four eyes see more than two. ” Also,it’s a efficient way to avoid mistakes.
最后,当困难来临时,好的领导应该主动面对并且承担起来
Last but not least, faced with difficulties, a perfect leader should look them straight in the eye and take them on actively.
一方面,英语节可以全身心投入到英语文化中。
For one thing, English Festival can motivate students to get fully involved in many activities like English lectures.
因此我们的老师应当教我们解决问题的方法,改变我们的学习习惯而不是让我们通过大量的做家庭作业来训练一
专题3
一、专题知识梳理
中考作文题材大部分来自于接近学生生活的方方面面,本次预测的作文主要是亲情和日常生活相关类话题;
二、专题精讲
1. 《责任感》
Responsibility
Yesterday, I broke a vase. This vase has been in my home for several years. I was afraid of being criticized. I didn’t dare to tell my parents. So I pretended nothing happened. But they discovered at last. It was strange that my father didn’t blame me, but teach me a lesson. He made me know that responsibility was necessary for everyone in the world. If a person was not responsible, he couldn’t do anything successful and may not be popular among the people around you. A responsible person would have the courage to undertake everything. This was what a boy should have. If I have done something wrong, I should take the responsibility.
昨天,我打碎了一个花瓶。那个花瓶在我们家很多年了。我怕被骂所以不敢告诉我父母。所以我就假装什么都没发生。但是最后他们还是发现了。很奇怪我爸爸不仅没有责怪我,反而给我上了一课。他让我知道责任感对我这个世界上的每一个人都是必须的。如果一个人没有责任感,他很难取得成功,也可能会让你在你周围不怎么受欢迎。一个有责任感的人会有勇气承担一切。这也是一个男孩所必须的。如果我做错了,我就该负起这个责任。
2.《关于东西方文化差异》
The Difference Culture Between the East and West
My dream is to study abroad in the future. I am always that kind of life can come true soon. But, before I realize my dream, I have to do some preparation. I think the most important thing I need to do first is to adapt the life there. It is said that there is a big difference between the eastern and western culture. If I know nothing, it is easy for me to have culture conflict. It will put me into an embarrass place. For example, dragon is the leader for allanimals and it has holy good meaning in china. But it means violence in the western country. I need to learn as much the cultural conflicts as possible to make my oversea life become easier.
我的梦想是以后可以去留学。我总是希望那样的生活能早日成真。但是,在实现梦想之前,我得做一些准备工作。我想我首先需要做的是适应那里的生活。据说东西方文化是有差异的。如果我什么都不知道,很容易发生文化冲突。这会置我于一个尴尬的地方。例如,龙是在中国是万兽之王,有着无比神圣的意义。但是在西方国家则是暴力的象征。我要尽量了解更多的文化冲突,这样我的留学生活才会变得更简单。
3.我的生活习惯
Everyone has their own habit. I have some living habits. I will take off my shoes and put on the slippers when I arrive home. And I get used to drink some soup before having dinner. What’s more, I have to keep my room light on until I fall asleep. If I am forced to change anything about this, I will be very uncomfortable. For example, if I don’t wear slipper at home, I will be very uncomfortable. If I can’t drink soup before dinner, I can’t eat anything. And I can’t fall asleep if the light is off. This is my living habit. Maybe I will change it one day, but now I can’t receive any change about them. 每个人都有自己的习惯。我有一些生活习惯。到家后我要换拖鞋。我习惯在吃饭之前喝点汤。还有就是睡着前我都要开着房间灯。如果我被强迫改变,我会很不舒服。例如,如果我在家不换拖鞋,我会很不舒服。如果我不在饭前喝点汤,我会吃不下任何东西。如果熄了灯我会睡不着。这就是我的生活习惯。也许有一天我会改变,但现在的我是无法接受。
三、专题过关
1.中考英语作文《中学生活》
Middle School Life
When it comes to middle school life, many people will regard it as busy, enrich and happy. For me, it is. The most obvious factor for middle school is study, study and study. Every day, students have to have classes and finish endless homework. They don’t have too much to do the thing beyond study. But they can learn lots of knowledge, having a better understanding about the world. Last, although they are busy all the day, they can make friends with students or teachers. Sometimes they still can play together. Though the life is hard, recall the life at that time is also very happy.
谈及中学生活时,很多人都会用忙碌,充实和开心来形容。对我来说,确实是这样。中学生活最明显的特点就是学习,学习,学习。每天学生都要去上课,完成那无止境的作业。他们并没有太多的时间来做学习以外的事。但是他们可以学到很多知识,对这个世界有着更深的了解。最后。虽然他们总是很忙,但是他们也仍然可以和同学,老师交朋友。有时候他们还可以一起玩。尽管生活艰辛,但是回想起那段时间仍然是很快乐的。
climbing and at last I reached the top. After that, I understand “Where there is a will, there is a way”. I would remember the unforgettable moment forever.
提高版
106. "Write at least 60 words about the topic“A happy memory”.(以“快乐的回忆”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
(注意;短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Use following points as a guide。(短文须包含下列要点)
Do you have a happy memory?
When and where did you feel happy?
What made you feel happy? (Give one example.)
范文:Talking of happy memories, I can’t help reminding of my childhood.
When I was in the primary school, I made a lot of good friends with my classmates.We often played with each other at our rest time.We liked playing the game of “hide and seek” best. Sometimes I seek people and others hid themselves here and there.The feeling of finding out them made me happy. I thought it was a sense of achievement.
The happy memory of my childhood will always be in my mind.
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Superstar and I”. ( 以“我和明星”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
Following questions for reference (以下问题仅供参考)
●Who is the Superstar in your heart?
●Why do you think she/he is Superstar?
●What can you learn from him / her?
范文:
There is no doubt that most of us have an idol in our hearts, without exception, including me. TVXQ, which is composed of five boys, is my favorite group. I love them not only because of their unique faces, powerful dance, moving songs and singing talent but also their personalities. Dream means everything, and your attitude is the direction towards it. No one or nothing can bring you down or make you give up as long as you keep trying. That's what I learn from them. Every time I want to give up, the TVXQ’ motto will come into my mind, Where's a will,there's a way.
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A successful person in my eyes ”. ( 以“我眼中的成功人士”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
短文需包含下列要点
●Who is the successful person in your eyes?
●Why do you think he/she is successful? ( Give two reasons.)
●What can you learn from him/her?
范文:Throughout the whole world, the most successful person is my mother. Although she is just an ordinary woman, I regard her as a star.
The reasons are quite simple. The essential point is that my mother is the one who gives birth to me. Whatever great pain she has overcome, she still tries her best to offer a happy and comfortable life. On the other hand, she succeeds in helping me with my study. It is such an honor to have an experienced person companied.
I hold the view that mother is a wonderful word all though my life. She teaches me how to love and the endless care. To become a person like my mother is the aim for me to achieve.下载本文