1 审题:审清作文体裁(类型)时态、人称等细节;
2 列提纲(文章结构框架):分几段,以及每段大体内容;
3 写作:在提纲的基础上补充要点;
4 复查:看查拼写、语法、标点等问题,靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等;
5 誊抄:不允许做任何的更改。
1.动笔之前,认真审题
《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题,看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2. 围绕中心,拟定提纲
要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题。书面表达,内容广泛,题材多样,要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记,要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信,则要注意书信的格式,注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。
3.中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分,根据错误多少来扣分。因此,中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:
(1) 格式是否有错。
(2) 拼写有无错误。
(3) 语言是否用错。
(4) 时态、语态错误。
(5) 标点错误。
(6) 人称是否用错。
二.作文一般框架:文章分3段:
(1)综述:概括性强,最多2句话引入主题;
(2)正文——主要内容:层次性强,一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3 个方面,每个方面最多2句话;
(3)结尾:紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。
三.技巧
1. 上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。
连接词1) 表示并列关系的过渡词:and, as well as, or …
2) 表示转折关系的过渡词:but, yet, however …
3) 表示时间关系的过渡词:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4) 表示空间关系的过渡词:near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5) 表示比较关系的过渡词:in the same way, just like, just as …
6) 表示对照关系的过渡词:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7) 表示递进关系的过渡词: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8) 表示因果关系的过渡词:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9) 表示解释说明的过渡词:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10) 表示强调的过渡词:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11) 表示目的的过渡词:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12) 表示列举的过渡词:for example , such as …
13) 表示总结性的过渡词:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
2.句型
在各种…之中…
Among various kinds of …,
e.g. Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.
就我的看法…;我认为…
In my opinion, …
= To my mind, ….
= As far as I am concerned, …
e.g. In my opinion, playing computer games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.
根据我个人经验…
According to my personal experience, …
= Based on my personal experience, …
e.g. According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good.
俗语说得好:「…」。
Well goes an old saying, "…"
= As an old saying goes (runs, says),"…“
e.g. As an old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way."
(A) …用下列方法… in the following ways.
(B) …有三个主要理由。 … for three major reasons.
e.g. I build my confidence in the following ways.
换言之…
in other words, …
e.g. In other words, I will try my best to live up to my goal.
曾经…最…的…
最高级+ 现在完成时
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
3.不会表达时
(1) 迂回而行
当汉语词义不会用英语表达时,可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路,然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。
(2) 小词大用
汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅,但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。
(3) 借花献佛
有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题,记忆犹新,那么就可信手拈来,为我所用。
注意事项
1. 时态一致
必须注意所用时态符合上下文。如果用过去时叙述一个故事,就要保证通篇都用过去时,不要在作文中间变成现在时。同样,如果是在谈论普遍问题、现状或日常习惯,就要用现在时,而不要用过去时
2. 主语一致
应该保持全文人称一致,这样读者才能跟随一个逻辑思维顺序。否则读者会感到困惑。
e.g. Although you may fail the exam, he can still be useful to the country.
3. 主谓一致/人称一致
确保语法正确。
e.g. Things I hate to do is doing homework.
4. 词序/语序
它能够帮助准确表达作者本意并并避免意义含糊不清。注意要让句子尽量保持英语的表达习惯。
e.g. I already have had lunch.
with her mum traveled to Italy
5.避免词的重复。
e.g. All in all, we had a wonderful trip. We travelled across Sydney, Canberra and Melbourne. We saw the beautiful coast of Queensland. We toured all of Perth. We had a great visit with Dan. Perhaps we will go again next winter.下载本文