✧There be 结构
错误表达:There have many people believe that computers are useful.
正确表达:There are many people who believe that computers are useful。
(不存在There have的形式,而且There be结构后不能再加谓语动词。)
✧情态动词
错误表达:We should be take effective measures。
正确表达:We should be take some effective measures.
(情态动词必须加一个动词原形,没有should be do这种结构。)
✧不一致
不一致既包括主谓不一致,也包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。
错误表达:When one have money, he can do what he want to。
正确表达:When one has money, he can do what he wants to。
(one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have 应改为has;同理,want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致。)
✧时态问题
错误表达:Some people argued that women should join the army.
正确表达:Some people argue that women should join the army.
(表达观点,陈述社会现象或者背景是的时候,不需要使用过去时态。)
✧语态问题
错误表达:Some people think that old buildings should preserve.
正确表达:Some people think that old buildings should be preserved。
(主动和被动使用混淆。)
✧悬垂修饰语
错误表达:To solve this problem, proper measures should be taken.
正确表达:To solve this problem, people should take proper measures.
(句中不定式短语“to solve this problem"的逻辑主语不清楚。)
错误表达:Serving in the army, self—respect and confidence can be cultivated。
正确表达:Serving in the army, women can cultivate their self—respect and confidence。
(句中现在分词短语“Serving in the army” 的逻辑主语不清楚。)
✧词性使用
错误表达:Nobody can negative the importance of education。
正确表达:Nobody can deny the importance of education.
(negative系形容词,误作动词。)
✧介词短语加了句号
错误表达: With the development of society. people begin to realize the importance of education.
正确表达: With the development of society, people begin to realize the importance of education。
(介词短语不是句子,不能加句号。)
✧句子不完整
错误表达:The question whether the internet is a blessing or a curse.
正确表达:The question whether the internet is a blessing or a curse is now being discussed heatedly.
(在句子中使用从句时,会出现缺少谓语的情况。)
✧固定词组的搭配
错误表达:There is a great deal of violence shown in media to the purpose of making people relaxed。
正确表达:There is a great deal of violence shown in media to the purpose for making people relaxed。
✧指代不清
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致.
错误表达:However, on the other hand ,the internet also has their disadvantages。
正确表达:However, on the other hand ,the internet is never without its disadvantages。
(代词的所指对象不明确,意思出现错误。)
✧such as 和 for example的区别
错误表达:Computers enjoy a host of merits for example high speed ,easy accessibility and great efficiency.
正确表达:Computers enjoy a host of merits such as high speed ,easy accessibility and great efficiency。
(for example加逗号再加一个完整句子.)
错误表达:Studying with students is beneficial. Such as, we can acquire both useful knowledge and practical skills.
正确表达:Studying with students is beneficial。 For example, we can acquire both useful knowledge and practical skills.
(such as加名词或现在分词.)
✧逗号隔开了两个完整的句子
错误表达:The human race has entered a marvelous age, the word is developing at an amazing rate。
正确表达:The human race has entered a marvelous age, and the word is developing at an amazing rate.
Or The human race has entered a marvelous age。 The word is developing at an amazing rate.
Or The human race has entered a marvelous age; the word is developing at an amazing rate.
Or The human race has entered a marvelous age, the word is developing at an amazing rate。
(逗号不能隔开了两个完整的句子。)
✧用词不当
是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题,学生在作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。
错误表达:The use of chemical obstacle in agriculture also gives rise to pollution。
正确表达:The use of chemical substance in agriculture also gives rise to pollution.(学生将obstacle “障碍"误作substance “物质”了.)
✧不连贯
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或者结构上下不畅通。
错误表达:As I see it, water shortage, it is the most pressing problem of the earth.
正确表达:As I see it, water shortage is the most pressing problem of the earth.
(water shortage与逗号后的it不连贯。)
✧名词单复数使用错误
错误表达:Living in this information-explosion society, we can obtain an increasing number of informations.
正确表达:Living in this information—explosion society, we can obtain an increasing number of information.
(information不可数,不能用复数,也不能用an increasing number of 来修饰。)
✧正式原则
一般不能出现缩写形式。
错误表达:As is known to all, we can’t do without advertisements.
正确表达:As is known to all, we cannot do without advertisements.
✧大小写的错误
每句开头第一个字母都得大写。
错误表达:As we all know, life is hope and hope is life。
正确表达:As we all know, life is hope and hope is life.
✧从句引导错误
错误表达:As is widely—accepted that there are many people which fail to take into account the fact that the diversity of species is the greatest charm in the world。
正确表达:As is widely-accepted, there are many people which fail to take into account the fact that the diversity of species is the greatest charm in the world.
(as引导的是非限定性定语从句,不能再加that.Which 的先行词是人,所以应该改成who.)
✧介词使用不当
错误表达:There is no yet absolute agreement in the question whether schools are of no use in the Computer Age.
正确表达:There is no yet absolute agreement on the question whether schools are of no use in the Computer Age。
错误表达:On a nutshell, we can conclude that media will still exert positive impacts on the societal development.
正确表达:In a nutshell, we can conclude that media will still exert positive impacts on the societal development
错误表达:The issue is familiar with people。
正确表达:The issue is familiar to people.下载本文