第一种：纠结打架型
人在矛盾的时候，内心就像有两个小人在打架，相信打架都有这个情绪体验。在读后续写中，把这种心理状态表达出来，会让文章显得更加传神。
摘选一：我没主意：把它放了吧，它准是死；养着它吧，家里没有笼子。我捧着它，好像世界上一切的生命都在我掌中似的。我不知怎样才好。——老舍《小麻雀》
摘选二：他痛苦地吐了一口气。他低声对自己说：“我不能再这样做！”“那么你要怎样呢？你有胆量么？你这个老好人！”马上就有一个声音在他的耳边反问道。……他立刻就知道这是他自己在讲话。他气恼地再说：“为什么没有胆量呢？难道我就永远是个老好人吗？” ——巴金《寒夜》
举例：（2016年10月浙江卷 夫妻吵架迷路）
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
续写场景节选：The sight of the dark forest sent a wave of terror running through her heart. “Should I give up trying?” A voice whispered in her ear. “No. Only a coward does nothing but wait,” another voice countered suddenly.
看到黑暗的森林，她的心头。“我应该放弃尝试吗？”有一个声音在她耳边耳语。不只有懦夫才什么也不等。”另一个声音突然反驳道。
练习：
1.（2020年7月浙江卷 熊口逃生）A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.
请描写我脑子里的两个小人，一个说跑，一个说斗：
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2.( 2018年6月浙江卷) We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
请描写我脑子里的两个小人，一个说等待，一个说寻找出路：
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答案：
1. The sight of its gaping mouth sent a wave of terror running through my heart. “Should I run away?” A nervous voice echoed in my head. “Just fight it or you wouldn’t run that far.” Another voice warned suddenly.
看到它张大的嘴巴，一股恐惧的浪潮涌上了我的心头。“我应该逃跑吗？”一个紧张的声音在我的脑海里回响。“只要战斗，否则你就不会跑得那么远。”另一个声音突然警告道。
2. Like a boat lost on the sea, we looked around aimlessly, surround by a wall of silence. “Should we wait here for help?” I thought nervously. “That is no better than a coward.” A voice sneered in my head.
就像一艘迷失在海上的船，我们漫无目的地环顾四周，周围是一堵寂静的墙。“我们应该在这里等帮助吗？”我紧张地想。“这并不比像个懦夫好。”一个声音在我的脑海里冷笑着。
第二种：大锅炖型
人的情绪表现有时候是复杂的，并不是单一的。如果能把这种混合的情绪表现出来，那么心理描写就显得非常生动。在读后续写中，惊讶感激之中，往往伴随着比较复杂的情绪。
摘选一：他两手捂着脸，既不敢相信他真的得到了幸福，担心这件侥幸的事会给他带来新的不幸，又极力想在手掌的黑暗中细细地享受这种新奇的感情。——张贤亮《灵与肉》
摘选二：我紧紧地而又久久地握住妻的手，默默地注视着那温柔的泪水，顺着伊的脸颊，缓缓流下。——这是辛酸的泪，也是幸福的泪。此时此刻，又觉得，什么言语，都似乎是多余的了。——田野《离合悲欢的三天》
举例：（2016年10月浙江卷）
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
续写：… Jane hugged her husband tightly, tears of regret and gratitude in eyes. Hardly could she believe she was saved eventually. Meanwhile, how eagerly she wanted the time with Jack to last as long as it could!
简紧紧地拥抱着她的丈夫，眼睛里充满了遗憾和感激的泪水。她几乎不敢相信自己最终还是得救了。与此同时，她多么急切地希望和杰克在一起的时间尽可能多长！
…Jane took his hand and kept her eyes glued to his face in silence, her tears rolling down her cheeks slowly — tears regret, of gratitude. That was when she felt nothing can express her love.
简握住他的手，眼睛默默地盯着他的脸，眼泪慢慢地顺着脸颊滑落——眼泪遗憾，感激。那时，她觉得没有什么能表达她的爱。
练习：
1. （2020年7月浙江卷）
Paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.
请续写我拍摄的一幕感人照片，同时感到为熊的饥饿感到遗憾。
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2.（2020年1月浙江卷）
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university.
请续写男孩对小狗的疼爱和感激。
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答案：
1. …She pressed the button of her camera just in time to record the most precious scene. Hardly could she believe what she had experience. Meanwhile, she couldn’t help feeling sorry for the hunger the bear suffered.
她按下了相机的按钮，及时录下了最珍贵的场景。她简直不敢相信自己的经历。与此同时，她也忍不住为这只熊所遭受的饥饿感到难过。
2. …He nestled the little dog in his arms, smiles spreading across his face — for the company it kept Poppy, for the warmth it brought to the house. At the moment, he felt any language was unnecessary.
他把小狗依偎在怀里，脸上露出了微笑——因为陪伴着Poppy，因为它给房子带来的温暖。此刻，他觉得任何语言都没有必要。
模拟演练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents' home in Missouri for Christmas. I stopped at a gas station(加油站)about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas.
I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car. I stopped and wondered what I should do. A car pulled up behind me. It was the couple I had spoken to at the gas station. They said they would take me to my friend's .We chatted on the way into the city, and when I got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card.
I wrote him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me. Soon afterward, I received a Christmas present from them. Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful.
Years later, I drove to a meeting in a nearby town in the morning. In late afternoon I returned to my car and found that I'd left the lights on all day, and the battery(电池)was dead. Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership - a shop selling cars - was right next door. I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me.
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After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it.
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翻译小练习：
1. 我立刻认出了他。这两个推销员是老两口，他们是Friendly Ford经销商的老板。
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2. “嘿，是你！你帮过我，记得吗？“我激动地对他们说。
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3. “是的，我们有！“老人笑了，我们经营商店是为了帮助更多的人。
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4. 你知道吗，这让我们的生活如此有意义！”
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5. 他们再一次解决了我的麻烦，但当我付钱时，他们不接受我的钱。
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6. 他们告诉我，刚开始经营这家店的时候，从来没有人抽时间给他们写信说声谢谢，但现在他们收到的感谢信越来越多，他们真的很高兴。
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参：
1. 我立刻认出了他。这两个推销员是老两口，他们是Friendly Ford经销商的老板。
I recognized him at once. The two salesmen were the older couple, and they were the owners of the Friendly Ford dealership.
2. “嘿，是你！你帮过我，记得吗？“我激动地对他们说。
“Hey, it’s you! You ever helped me, remember?” I said to them excitedly.
3. “是的，我们有！“老人笑了，我们经营商店是为了帮助更多的人。
“Yeah, we do!” the old man laughed, we run the shop to help more people.
4. 你知道吗，这让我们的生活如此有意义！”
You know, it makes our life so meaningful!”
5. 他们再一次解决了我的麻烦，但当我付钱时，他们不接受我的钱。
They solved my trouble once again, but when I paid for it, they would not accept my money.
6. 他们告诉我，刚开始经营这家店的时候，从来没有人抽时间给他们写信说声谢谢，但现在他们收到的感谢信越来越多，他们真的很高兴。
They told me that when they ran the shop at first, no one had ever taken the time to write them and say thank you, but now they received more and more thank-you notes from people, which they were really happy about.
参考范文：
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I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me. I recognized him at once. The two salesmen were the older couple, and they were the owners of the Friendly Ford dealership. “Hey, it’s you! You ever helped me, remember?” I said to them excitedly. Yeah, we do!” the old man laughed, we run the shop to help more people. You know, it makes our life so meaningful!”
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After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it. They solved my trouble once again, but when I paid for it, they would not accept my money. They told me that when they ran the shop at first, no one had ever taken the time to write them and say thank you, but now they received more and more thank-you notes from people, which they were really happy about.
模拟演练02
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Dawn came slowly. A shaft of sunlight reached into the 4-meter-deep crater（弹坑），making the metal of the bomb shine. The boys were numb and tight, and hungry. They tried not to look at the huge shape of the bomb that appeared over them.
Harry suddenly opened his eyes and seized Jack's arm. "Listen!" he whispered. Jack's eye widened instantly, and both boys strained their ears. They could hear a man talking softly. The voice seemed a long way off. Jack went to shout, but Harry clamped his hand over Jack's mouth. "Don't shout/' he hissed（发出嘘声），"We'll be blown into pieces."
The soft voice came nearer and nearer. Suddenly, an army captain appeared at the top of crater. He was talking to a mouthpiece（话筒）around his neck. He stopped talking when he saw the boys. "What the..." he said, “Who are you?" Hairy found his voice, "Jack and Harry Brown." "Is that dog dead?" asked the captain. “No： he’s sleeping," said Harry.
The captain spoke into the mouthpiece again, “Sergeant（中士）," he said, stopped and took a breath before he went on. “There are two kids and a dog down here." Then the captain crouched down and stared closely at the bomb. “Don't move and don't speak," he said, "or we'll all go up." He began talking quietly to his sergeant.
Jack and Harry were too stiff to move. They held Raf, the dog, tightly and waited. Another man appeared at the top of the crater. "I thought so," he said, "It's them all right?"
"It’s Old Tin Hat!" whispered Jack. Old Tin Hat was carrying a ladder. He and the captain lowered the ladder into the loose earth next to the two boys. "Keep still," the captain warned them. As the captain held on at the top. Old Tin Hat started to come down the ladder very slowly, very gently, step by step. At last, he reached the bottom, and with one movement, he lifted Jack on his back. Harry watched as Jack was carried up. It seemed to take an age.
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With a sudden fall of earth, Old Tin Hat froze halfway up.
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Old Tin Hat pulled Harry onto his back, carrying Raf under his arm.
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翻译小练习：
1. 哈利吓得喘不过气来，但幸运的是那家伙很稳定。
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2. Old Tin Hat又起来了。他一到山顶，手就伸出来，杰克就不见了。
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3. Old Tin Hat又从梯子上下来了，温柔而谨慎。
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4. 最终，他加入了哈里和英国皇家空军。
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5. 尽管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后，但他坚持说他们会在一起。
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6. Old Tin Hat第二次开始爬梯子。
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7. 男孩和狗的重量使他喘不过气来。
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8. 经过巨大的努力，他们到达了火山口的顶部。
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9. 所有人都获救了！远处传来微弱的欢呼声。
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10. 一群人挤在栅栏后面。
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11. 在那儿，“妈妈！”Hurry冲过去，紧紧地抱着妈妈。后来，消息传来，已安全运走。
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参：
1. 哈利吓得喘不过气来，但幸运的是那家伙很稳定。
Harry gasped with terror but luckily the ladder was steady.
2. Old Tin Hat又起来了。他一到山顶，手就伸出来，杰克就不见了。
Old Tin Hat started up again. No sooner had he got to the top than hands reached out and Jack disappeared.
3. Old Tin Hat又从梯子上下来了，温柔而谨慎。
Again down the ladder came Old Tin Hat, gently and cautiously.
4. 最终，他加入了哈里和英国皇家空军。
Eventually, he joined Harry and Raf.
5. 尽管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后，但他坚持说他们会在一起。
Though he suggested that dog went last, Harry insisted that they would be together.
6. Old Tin Hat第二次开始爬梯子。
Old Tin Hat started to climb the ladder for the second time.
7. 男孩和狗的重量使他喘不过气来。
The weight of the boy and the dog made him gasp.
8. 经过巨大的努力，他们到达了火山口的顶部。
With great efforts, they came to the top of the crater.
9. 所有人都获救了！远处传来微弱的欢呼声。
Everybody was rescued! A faint cheer rose from a long way off.
10. 一群人挤在栅栏后面。
A group of people crowded behind the barrier.
11. 在那儿，“妈妈！”Hurry冲过去，紧紧地抱着妈妈。后来，消息传来，已安全运走。
And there was, “Mom!” Hurry rushed over, hugging his mom tightly. Later, news came that the bomb was taken away, safe.
参考范文：
With a sudden fall of earth, Old Tin Hat froze halfway up.
Harry gasped with terror but luckily the ladder was steady. Old Tin Hat started up again. No sooner had he got to the top than hands reached out and Jack disappeared. Again down the ladder came Old Tin Hat, gently and cautiously. Eventually, he joined Harry and Raf. Though he suggested that dog went last, Harry insisted that they would be together.
Old Tin Hat pulled Harry onto his back, carrying Raf under his arm.
Old Tin Hat started to climb the ladder for the second time. The weight of the boy and the dog made him gasp. With great efforts, they came to the top of the crater. Everybody was rescued! A faint cheer rose from a long way off. A group of people crowded behind the barrier. And there was, “Mom! Hurry rushed over, hugging his mom tightly. Later, news came that the bomb was taken away, safe.下载本文
